tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post8994131020651287034..comments2022-11-06T06:37:49.518-06:00Comments on Writing: The Writer's VoiceMelindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17182951575531989338noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-59576414019814614562012-05-08T08:46:31.180-05:002012-05-08T08:46:31.180-05:00great entry. great tension from the very start. go...great entry. great tension from the very start. good luck with the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-75847450073258464252012-05-06T22:19:10.539-05:002012-05-06T22:19:10.539-05:00A very true-to-life situation.
Good luck.
Tina (...A very true-to-life situation.<br /><br />Good luck.<br /><br />Tina (#194)TYHatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00654651712633828288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-659340040921950092012-05-06T20:23:12.640-05:002012-05-06T20:23:12.640-05:00Good luck!Good luck!Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-9723042446144655002012-05-06T18:08:44.927-05:002012-05-06T18:08:44.927-05:00I love what Adam Oster said in his post. I second...I love what Adam Oster said in his post. I second it with spades! Nice job, and good luck.C.G.Aylinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09612362478635598996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-62409729050449209032012-05-06T15:05:35.090-05:002012-05-06T15:05:35.090-05:00Hooray for a fellow contemp! Good luck from #70!Hooray for a fellow contemp! Good luck from #70!Dahlia Adlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02265012593385220677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-13904385706747690112012-05-05T15:50:24.828-05:002012-05-05T15:50:24.828-05:00I love the way you captured this moment. This is s...I love the way you captured this moment. This is something we can all relate to. Great job. I'm usually more into the supernatural or government conspiracies, but I really like the poignancy of this. I would definitely read more.SueJayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-5423197566240158632012-05-05T15:48:30.184-05:002012-05-05T15:48:30.184-05:00Oo, sounds like borderline NA. I like it. :) Good ...Oo, sounds like borderline NA. I like it. :) Good luck!Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-25008634696093469802012-05-05T11:43:10.445-05:002012-05-05T11:43:10.445-05:00Stopping in to wish you luck in the contest! I rea...Stopping in to wish you luck in the contest! I really like your premise. I teach many kids who would be all about this!Kimberly Gabrielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05588782441929008886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-16050807037140905212012-05-04T23:35:30.135-05:002012-05-04T23:35:30.135-05:00I spent some time re-reading the plot summary, try...I spent some time re-reading the plot summary, trying to find the super-power, or secret ability, or underground government agency. . . but couldn't find one. And that made me happy. I mean, I love me some special plot devices, but it's refreshing to see a story about real kids dealing with real issues.<br />Once again, good luck!Adam Osterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13890892064225079261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-15751635243233461252012-05-04T22:43:03.323-05:002012-05-04T22:43:03.323-05:00Good luck from one contestant to another!Good luck from one contestant to another!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-83600703332475698762012-05-04T17:44:37.444-05:002012-05-04T17:44:37.444-05:00There's something so genuine about this--the t...There's something so genuine about this--the teen experience. I'm hooked!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607291218714097810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-34228955126096346082012-05-04T11:18:35.235-05:002012-05-04T11:18:35.235-05:00Great voice - sounds totally right for YA. I must ...Great voice - sounds totally right for YA. I must confess I missed the title Summer at the top so it took me a while to figure it was a girl talking, not a boy, but that only makes me like it more - not into girly girls.<br />Had to check you out early - we're the only Gray's (there are a couple of Grey's) in the contest.<br />Good Luck Melinda<br />Cheers<br /> Jacky (#130)<br /> xxxJacky Grayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08700901684207744694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-70379187077812582732012-05-04T10:05:42.995-05:002012-05-04T10:05:42.995-05:00Glad to see another contemporary story -- good luc...Glad to see another contemporary story -- good luck in the competition! Anne (#102)Anne Pfefferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11740653757340627122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-42799044134779712372012-05-04T00:30:41.812-05:002012-05-04T00:30:41.812-05:00Just stopped by to wish you luck! It's nice t...Just stopped by to wish you luck! It's nice to see some contemporary getting in there - love this!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-25613780589903247932012-05-03T21:43:32.625-05:002012-05-03T21:43:32.625-05:00Thanks, everyone! Good luck to all of you, too!Thanks, everyone! Good luck to all of you, too!Melindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17182951575531989338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-81514034730044314172012-05-03T20:32:37.971-05:002012-05-03T20:32:37.971-05:00Fellow entrant stopping by to say hi!
Your entry ...Fellow entrant stopping by to say hi!<br /><br />Your entry looks great! Good luck in the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-15439918137000418702012-05-03T11:37:42.423-05:002012-05-03T11:37:42.423-05:00I love YA contemporary, and yours sounds interesti...I love YA contemporary, and yours sounds interesting! Good luck! :)Brenda McKennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14333395912585448384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-52429085998681628242012-05-03T10:33:21.943-05:002012-05-03T10:33:21.943-05:00Hi Melinda, I'm stopping by from the Writer...Hi Melinda, I'm stopping by from the Writer's Voice Contest to wish you the best of luck! Nice to meet you.<br /><br />I would've followed, but I can't find your widget.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-87659132099893121232012-05-03T09:35:50.752-05:002012-05-03T09:35:50.752-05:00Thanks, Robyn! Good luck to you, too.Thanks, Robyn! Good luck to you, too.Melindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17182951575531989338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930520356680811594.post-3392047037467471882012-05-03T08:21:07.506-05:002012-05-03T08:21:07.506-05:00Love it! (but I loved Unvisible too :)
Best of lu...Love it! (but I loved Unvisible too :) <br />Best of luck to you.Robyn Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589972339101157288noreply@blogger.com